This is a work in progress of a commission I'm finishing up. Client wanted something similar to the Mercy piece. It's always the best to get work for shit you would be drawing anyways. Haha.
Since it's a commission, I'll give you a scrutinizing critique.
The breasts are dangerously close to a uni-boob and there's an absence of indication of a ribcage on the right side of the image. Also, the wrinkles in the cloth under the right armpit are too uniform.
Otherwise I think it's awesome! Love the fingers.. so delicate. It's funny how she's slightly pudgy. You seem to draw them like that as though it's something you know you'll never have! =P
Aaahh, thanks so much for the crit. I knew there was something funky going on with her boobs, haha.
Under her arm was actually the beginning of some decoration, but point taken!
Is she? Maybe my definition of pudgy is different from the rest of the world's? XD I guess I just like curvy girls, fuck knows I'll never be that voluptuous, LOL
It has to do with the highlight of the belly button. You have it above, with no definition and in a convex shape. Also, in thinner women, the "line" of the belly button is vertical.. you drew yours horizontal.
Since it's a commission, I'll give you a scrutinizing critique.
ReplyDeleteThe breasts are dangerously close to a uni-boob and there's an absence of indication of a ribcage on the right side of the image. Also, the wrinkles in the cloth under the right armpit are too uniform.
Otherwise I think it's awesome! Love the fingers.. so delicate. It's funny how she's slightly pudgy. You seem to draw them like that as though it's something you know you'll never have! =P
Aaahh, thanks so much for the crit. I knew there was something funky going on with her boobs, haha.
ReplyDeleteUnder her arm was actually the beginning of some decoration, but point taken!
Is she? Maybe my definition of pudgy is different from the rest of the world's? XD I guess I just like curvy girls, fuck knows I'll never be that voluptuous, LOL
It has to do with the highlight of the belly button. You have it above, with no definition and in a convex shape. Also, in thinner women, the "line" of the belly button is vertical.. you drew yours horizontal.
ReplyDeleteI.. am not even going to get into this LOL
ReplyDeleteHEY IT'S FOR A COMMISSION!
ReplyDeleteIndeed, but I still disagree.
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